Escape
Slouched, slumped, bundled
My Body!
Soaked, dripping wet
Beads of tears and sweat,
A sticky stench clinging to me.
Violent cries hushed to silent wails
As they chocked on my throat,
Squeezing out through my clenched teeth.
I lay a shattered figurine.
Long hours passed before,
The tears dried up,
Lungs welled up,
I slowly stood up.
The mirror, cold blooded;
Staring; with impassive savagery.
Its callous cavernous eyes,
Stripping me with ruthless repugnance.
Bare, battered, and broken,
I say to myself
“Enough!
Straight!
Stand straight!”
A yelp within.
“No!
Can’t let them see!
Can’t let them know!”
Lips stretched – ear to ear, with a steady shiver
Teeth blared – pale fear beneath a fake sneer
Hairs were brushed and cheeks were wiped
And a silent blurt,
“This is happiness”,
I coaxed a farce through my head
And put a bullet through my skull.
Not a single sound escaped.
-DUNDAPPAN
Correct me if my interpretation is wrong but, is this about acceptance or peer pressure? Also when you write “they” to whom are you referring to? “This is happiness” and is that supposed to be sarcasm?
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No its open to interpretation. I am just trying to describe the feeling of pain. It could be anything like you said peer pressure, acceptance, domestic violence. I feel each person who has experienced these feelings will relate to it in a different way. As for who “they” are is also subjective. Each person has their own fears. And yeah “this is happiness” sounds more like sarcasm but i was aiming for insanity, when you try to convince yourself that you are happy. But yup sarcasm works.
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Well I’m glad it is.
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Thanks for the comment buddy. I appreciate you taking time out to read it and extra points for asking those questions. Muchas Gracias
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Reblogged this on SEERAT'S CORNER and commented:
Couldn’t resist reblogging this beautiful poem..
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Keep setting yourself free poetically ❤️ don’t stop being beautiful you. Pain will always have gain when you push through for your breakthroughs. Blessings 🙏🏼
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